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trying not to sound too self-righteous - Because Nobody can eat 50 eggs
April 2007
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nyarhotep
nyarhotep
-- Mrkgnao! the cat cried.
Wed, Feb. 21st, 2007 06:33 pm
trying not to sound too self-righteous

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somerled
somerled
somerled
Thu, Feb. 22nd, 2007 12:58 am (UTC)

The problem is it's a bit grandiose. I've never seen you lean so heavily on adjectives as here. Maybe keep it simpler? Don't try to reach so far.


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nyarhotep
nyarhotep
-- Mrkgnao! the cat cried.
Thu, Feb. 22nd, 2007 01:52 am (UTC)

hmm, i was trying to be precise. ¿what do you see as the overt adjectives?


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